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Hello everyone and welcome to our classroom blog. This blog will serve as a weekly online journal entry. It will be a way to earn points for Language Arts class but SO much more. It will be a way for you to get your voice out there! Every week there will be a discussion topic/question posted by yours truly and it will be your job to respond. Your response may be in direct relation to the topic or may be a comment about another student's response. The topics will vary but your job will remain the same. Respond to the topic in as much detail as you find necessary and in as genuine a matter as possible!

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Sunday, February 27, 2011

BLOG #10 Week of 2/28-3/4

BLOG #10 Block 3/4 only...

For this blog post I want you to reflect on your research paper by answering the following questions:

1. Topic of your paper
2. One thing you are proud of
3. One thing from your paper you don't like or are unsure of
4. The two vocab words/phrases you are using in your intro
5. Are you including BOR vocab for extra credit? If so, how many?

Example Response:

1. Pro Dress Code in school
2. I really like how I wrote my call to action
3. I need to make sure i am quoting and citing sources correctly
4. Liberty, Common Good
5. No

27 comments:

  1. 1. Gay Marriage
    2. my introduction paragraph
    3. my rebutal paragraph
    4. human rights, justice
    5. no

    ReplyDelete
  2. 1. Pro Gay Marrige.
    2. I liked how I wrote my thesis paragrah.
    3. I am unsure how to cite the sources. correctly.
    4. Liberty and civil rights.
    5. I am not sure yet I might add two or three.

    *Raman Kaur*

    ReplyDelete
  3. 1. Against Telemarketing

    2. I like how I quoted Officer Doucett and how I concluded my Essay. (Call to Action)

    3. I am usure of how I stated/cited my sources.

    4. Human Rights, Life, Pursuit of Happiness, Common Good.

    5. Yes not sure how many yet, but I have 4 as of now.

    ReplyDelete
  4. 1. Pro Gun Control

    2. How my paper is writen strong about the topic.

    3.How to stae facts with source included.

    4. Life, Civil rights

    5.Maybe

    ReplyDelete
  5. 1. The topic of my research paper is Gay Marriages
    2. I am proud of all of the facts I have researched.
    3. One thing I don't really feel like is good enough is my organization.
    4. Tyhe two vocab/phrases I am using is, Equality and Civil Rights
    5. Yes I am including the BOR, I will be including 4.

    - Janelle. (:

    ReplyDelete
  6. 1.less gun control
    2.my facts and quotes
    3.my thiesis
    4.not positive yet
    5.no

    ReplyDelete
  7. 1.Students right to free speech.
    2.I like some of the facts I found.
    3.I need stop repeating my self in every fact.
    4.Free speach,equal rights.
    5.No

    ReplyDelete
  8. 1. Right to own a gun
    2.I really like my voice
    3. I'm not sure if my facts really work
    4. Human rights and common good
    5. Yes, 10

    -Jordan Raymond

    ReplyDelete
  9. 1. Pro Death Penalty.
    2. I am happy at the voice that I used.
    3. I hope that I used the right words!
    4. Human rights and Justice.
    5. I know that I am going to use some but I don't know which ones yet.. i want to add those in later.

    -Hanna Hanson :)

    ReplyDelete
  10. 1. For Gay Marriages.
    2. I'm proud of my qoutes and my reasons why.
    3. I don't like my intros and conclusions.
    4. Pursuit of happiness, and Equal rights.
    5. Yes. I don't know how many I will be using yet.

    ReplyDelete
  11. 1. Against Death Penalty
    2.I like the way that I stated my call to action
    3. I need to fix how I much I go into detail
    4.equal right and common good
    5. Maybe, still thinking about it, maybe one or two

    ReplyDelete
  12. 1.against gun control
    2.i am using information from events
    3.if i am making a point
    4.equal rights,common good
    5.yes, human rights-jordan carlson

    ReplyDelete
  13. 1. Anti Gun Control
    2. My rebbuttal paragraph
    3. My bibliography
    4. Life; Civil rights
    5. No

    $$Mikey D out son$$

    ReplyDelete
  14. 1.Against Dress Codes/Uniforms.
    2.My paper shows strong disagremeant for having dress codes/hars rules.
    3.I need to support a little bit more evidence in my body paragraphs.
    4.Diversity, Justice.
    5.I am inculding BOR extra credit: Estimate; 7-8 max. I think.

    ~GeddyBrandt. ♥

    ReplyDelete
  15. 1. against gun control
    2. introductuary paragraph
    3. concluding paragraph
    4. justice and cival rights
    5. I am not sure I might add them in later, 1 or 2

    ReplyDelete
  16. 1. Pro Death Penalty
    2. My opinions
    3. Some of my wording
    4. Civil Rights and Justice
    5. Maybe 1 or 2

    ReplyDelete
  17. 1. less gun control
    2. My introduction
    3. I need to make the scentences of the body paragraphs less "choppy".
    4. common good & human rigts
    5. NO

    ReplyDelete
  18. 1.] Pro death penalty.
    2.] I like how I wrote my rebuttle paragraph.
    3.] I'm unsure of my 2nd body paragraph, because the small amount of facts.
    4.] Civil Rights, & Justice.
    5.] No, I'm not doing the extra credit.

    -Christine D.

    ReplyDelete
  19. 1. Against the Patriot Act
    2. I like the quotes that I found
    3. My rebutal
    4. Justice, Liberty
    5. No

    ReplyDelete
  20. 1.Pro-Death Penalty
    2.I like my facts and my opinions
    3. I don't like my intro and conclusion, like Marie said
    4.Life/Lives and Truth
    5.I don't think so
    -Wendy Fillman

    ReplyDelete
  21. 1.Pro Dress Codes
    2.I am proud of all the hard I have put into my paper
    3.I am having a hard time trying to find stories
    4.Truth,Equality\
    5.Yes I am doing extra credit and I think I have about ten BORs

    ReplyDelete
  22. 1. agaist flag burning
    2. my hook
    3. my ending
    4. diversity, common good
    5. yes

    ReplyDelete
  23. 1. Gay Marriage
    2. The length of my research paper
    3. my rebutal
    4. equality,civil rights
    5. no

    ReplyDelete
  24. 1.Pro-Death penalty
    2. I like my reasons and opinions
    3. I don't really like my intro and conclusion
    4.Life/lives and truth
    5. I don't think so
    -Weendy F.

    ReplyDelete
  25. 1. Pro Lethal Injection
    2. I like my hook
    3. my facts
    4.justice, equal rights
    5.no

    ReplyDelete
  26. 1. Pro Death Penalty
    2. I like my introduction paragraph
    3. My call to action. I need to redo it.
    4. Justice and Rule of Law
    5. Yes, I'm not sure how many yet
    Tessa

    ReplyDelete
  27. 1.) Cufrew Laws
    2.) I really like my strong evidence.
    3.) I am unsure about my conclusion.
    4.) Truth and Life
    5.) I might but not at the moment

    ReplyDelete